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Monday, 27 November 2017

The use of metaphors by these room 24 writers is very impressive and I think a few people will be very moved!

  My mum
           By Lucia Preece

My mum is a genie granting my wishes all day long
My mum is an artist concocting colorful pieces of magic all day long
My mum is the golden flower from rapunzel curing me when i feel sick
My mum is google continually answering all my questions
My mum is a valt protecting all of my family
My mum is spring blooming on me every morning
My mum is mother nature she just has to click her fingers and everything grows perfectly
My mum is perfume made out of sugar spice and all things nice
My mum is a professional chef in the making
My mum is the most  valuable diamond in the world because  i would never trade her for anything
My mum is a torch lighting my way through the dark times in life

My Dad
My Dad is a  rugby ball tough, and  strong. And when ever someone is in his  way he will knock them out.
My Dad  is the king of the castle telling everyone what to do.
My dad is a cuddly teddy bear always giving us  hugs.
My dad is a   cheetah   alway chasing after me.
My dad is a tickle monster always making me laugh.
My dad is a taxi  always driving me to netball
My dad is an artist always draw awesome pictures.

By Addison Dent


My mum

My mum is a vacuum tidying up my messes.
My mum is a chef always making the yummiest foods
My mum is a diamond shining above the rest
My mum is a superhero appearing everywhere i go
My mum is a queen ruling the castle
My mum is a blossom   that smells so sweet
My mum is a cupcake beautiful and pretty

By Addison Dent

Metaphor poem
Harry is a …
Harry is a sloth always in his room.
Harry is a tornado with his crazy hair.
Harry is an actor always performing his weird acts.
Harry is a star always brightening up my day.
Harry is the sky tower looking over me and my sister.
Harry is a machine always working hard to get good grades.
Harry is a couch always sitting in the same boring spot.

By Lucy Sanderson

My Mum
My mum is A machine always cleaning and tidying the house.
My mum is A teacher always teaching me new things.
My mum is A dictionary always telling me new words and what they mean.
My mum is A superhero looking after me and my brothers.
My mum is A diamond shining so bright it blinds me.
My mum is A chef always cooking me delicious food.
My mum is a taxi always driving me places.  

By Samuel Creagh


Teegan is, google always coming up with the answers to the annoying fights me and my friends have.

She is, a rainbow always changing moods and colours.

My best friend is, Autumn because of her lovely auburn hair.

Her, scent trails behind her like a shadow she is a sweet smelling perfume.

Teegan is, music filling my ears with harmony.

She is, gold and never changes that.

Teegan is, a teddy bear always cuddling me at sleepovers.

                 

By Sophia Crosbie

My Brother

My brother is a statue tall and still territorial over over his room
 
My brother is a computer looking at a screen all the time

My brother is a machine hard worker at school

My brother is a superhero helps me with anything

My brother is an artist coloring,painting, drawing

My brother is a comedian making me laugh and telling me jokes



MY mum

My mum is a vacuum cleaning my mess
My mum is a helper looking after me and my brother.  
My mum is a looking after my brother a lot
My mum is a good person helping my brother when i get him angry

My mum is a taxi driving me everywhere

My mum is a designer helping me with my hair

My mum is a jolly being very happy, excised, amazing person to be around with.

By Scarlett Shaw

My sister

1 My sister is a book, she can tell me everything.

2 My sister is a pen, she can draw pictures for me.

3 My sister is a toy, I can play with her everyday.

4 My sister is a big bag, she can help me take everything.

5 My sister is a plant, giving me lots of good food.

By Poseidon

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