Michaela
Westcott, Year 4, Room 20
In the holidays I went to my nanna’s house
and me and Caitlin heard a bang on the window. I felt really scared.
We went outside to see and I felt worried.
It turned out it was a bird, but not just
any bird …. It was a baby white eye. It had nice, green , silky feathers and a
white ring around its eyes.
It was lying on its face. I was really sad.
Caitlin was really lucky because she got to
hold it. I felt really happy because it was all better.
Jessica
Williams, Year 3, Room 20
The Bird
One time I came back from Poppy’s house. I
went into my bedroom and I saw feathers and I was shocked.
Then I saw something come out from under
the bed and my cat was there with a bird! It was so cute. It was green and
fluffy. It was so, so … big!!!
Next I put it into a box. “Oh, don’t forget
to poke holes into it.” I thought.
But suddenly my cat found it and bit it. I
was so sad. I burst into tears. But the next morning it was gone and I was
surprised.
Great recounts Room 20. I love the description you have used.
ReplyDeleteGreat recounts Michaela and Jessica. I like the personal comments except I felt sad that your cat bit the bird, Jessica.
ReplyDeleteWell done Michaela, that was a beautiful description! You too Jessica!
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ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your writing Michaela and Jessica. I can picture the birds with your descriptive words.
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