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Monday, 13 March 2017

Room 25 have been learning how to write recounts with a good hook. Check out the hooks that they have been writing to lead into their recounts.

Brooke T - Year 3
Swoosh, crash went the wind and the waves as my, Mum, Dad and Ben walked to the beach.

Caleb - Year 3
Boom! Crash! The storm was coming. I was safe inside with my family. 

Zoe - Year 4
"Wow Dad you actually let us go out to McDonald's?"

Katie - Year 4
Drop Drop Drop the rain was coming down fast.

Maria - Year 4
Early one wet, Saturday morning we went to Hamilton.

Amy - Year 4
Smash, crash went the tramp. The wind was howling. It was so windy that the tramp broke. 

Brooke D - Year 4
Have you ever been to the Holi Fest? Well if you haven't gone I will tell you all about it.

Harlem - Year 4
Have you ever been to camp? Let me tell you about an exciting trip that my dad and I went on.

Yanni - Year 4
One spooky night when the light was off I opened the door and I heard a boom.

Anton - Year 4
On a freezing, cold day my Dad, Mum and I went to the airport to go to Rarotonga.

Finn - Year 4
One stormy, wet morning we were going to our baby cousin's house. 

Vini - Year 4
On a cold stormy night I was fast asleep then boom, crash the shed just fell over. 

6 comments:

  1. These hooks really work! I want to read the rest of those recounts now!! Mrs Goodall

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  2. Thanks Mrs Goodall! Room 25 will be so pleased that we have been able to "hook" you in!!

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  3. Yes I wonder what will happen next? Great hooks Room 25!

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  4. I am hooked Room 25. I can't wait to read your recounts.

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  5. These are great hooks. I can't wait to read the rest of these recounts.

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