I typed up the texts by these incredibly talented year 2 English language learners and fixed a few little spelling mistakes. All the wonderful words and sentences were created independently though.
The thunder clouds covered the sky. I thought it was midnight. My mum was waking up because of the thunder. When my mum woke, she thought it was midnight too. Then she looked at her phone. It was actually seven o'clock. The thunder sounded like an explosion. I like the thunder. But everybody else is scared of the thunder. When my friend is sharing her news when she said about the thunder, the thunder suddemly boomed loudly. My sister was not scared too.
By Grace, room 10
I hear the thunder. Lightning is like a flash. The sky is dark. The thunder is rumbling.
By Ricky, room 10
The pond was filling up this morning because of the rain. The rain was heavy. It was hitting my roof. I didn't really like this morning. The thunder sounded like a dragon breathing fire. The sky was black. The clouds were shutting out the light.
By Leveke, room 11
The thunder sounded like a dragon breathing fire. The pond was filling up with water. Lightning lit up my room. The sky was dark.
By Jona, room 11
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