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Friday, 25 March 2022

Enjoy these fantastic descriptive pieces by our room 17 writers. We have to be thankful for the thunderstorm - it prompted amazing pieces :)

 





The weather is stormy. It goes booming and crashing and the flashing is pink. Cassie

Lightning went zooming down with strong crashing rain. When the teacher was doing the roll, thunder crashed around. 

Jano

 It flashed blue! Then there was a boom! It was noisy! The sky lit up!

Sophie


 Suddenly I was woken up by the bang, boom and smash. My heart was pounding. It was crackling in the sky. I was afraid. It felt like I was falling off a huge cliff. 

Connor


When the big lightening came, I felt scared and I covered my ears.

Maya 


It was raining. Thunder cracked in the sky. Lightening flickered and the wind howled! Everything was silent. Only the soaking rain flickered through the howling wind. Then I heard lightning boom again. I skipped a heart beat. It was stormy weather. My shoes were soaked. Everything was thundery and rainy!

Mila 

 

When I woke up I heard thunder and lightning. The thunder was louder than 70 elephants. A loud sound boomed and crashed on my roof. The thunder storm was loud!

Jamie


This morning I was having breakfast when the lights started flickering and then it started pouring with rain . There was booming thunder and flashing lightning. 

Hudson


 The noisy thunder was very loud. The strong lightning could make fire. Lightning can kill!

Alec 

This morning when I went to school there was a surprising, striking flash of lightning.

 Ari


The clapping thunder echoed through the sky. The air was stuffy and clouds filled the sky. The rain crashed down. I saw flickering lightning light up the stormy day. I was drenched by the time I got to my classroom.

Hazel

 

The lightening was cool. I loved it. I went outside. It was raining fast. I got a big fright.

Sophie


There was lightning and loud thunder. Dark thunder boomed down. The rain hailed down from the sky. It got me soaking wet.

Blake  


This morning the lightning and thunder woke me up! When I was having breakfast I heard thunder. My heart was pounding and the hammering rain just went on and on! When I went to the car I sprinted to it but I got soaking wet. I was really cold. I tried to stay under the shelter to get to class.

Logan

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