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Sunday 7 May 2017

My word - the students from room 23 paint pictures with words! Check out the language features!

The Giant
The giant is as blue as the sky. He is holding a tree waiting to hit something. He is as big as the sky tower. He hasn’t showered in 17 years. He is blue jelly. He eats spiders and worms. His dirty necklace is swinging on his neck.
By Tahlya Rose


The big fat ugly giant stomped his huge feet. His necklace sways like a swing. His rotten black bent teeth smell like a dump. His shirt flaps up and down like a bird.
By Zaander


The giant is blue. He is a big and fat giant. He has a necklace and a horn. He looks like he is angry. He eats meat and drinks rain.
By Christen


There was a giant. He was as big as a dinosaur. He had sharp teeth and he was dirty as a dustbin on the road. He was a devil. His jacket was flying across the clouds. He was horrible and evil.
By Madison


The giant has long, dirty, sharp nails. It would take years to give this guy a manicure! His hair is like a bowl of curly french fries that you get at an restaurant. His stomach is 10 times bigger than the school. The giant is as tall as the sky tower.
By Ariana


The an imaginary world there was a 17 feet tall giant named Garod. He was sitting on a small old bench in the park.He had a small sheep called Gary.Garod was really cold. He had a black jumper with holes in it. Garod decided to sell his old jumper to buy some scissors so he could cut Gary’s wool off and make a new jumper.
By Sergei


Stomp! Stomp! There was a humongous giant. His skin colour was white and he was smoking the biggest cigar. His cigar was as big as a plane and his legs were so hairy he looks like a werewolf. The giants jacket was dancing all around. He is the meanest person ever.
By Carlos T




The giant had a white lab coat with blood red pants as he chewed on some stale hard bread while his fancy white hat shone in the light from the big smiley sun. As he started to walk his shoes crashed against the ground as loud as an elephant running across the sandy savannah.The Ugly red giant stomped on the grass as the happy little flowers started to frown. His bright T-shirt went dull. He was a wrecking ball as tall as the sky tower.
By Quentin


Bam!Thump! A giant with hair as green as slime looked at me. He was a dragon.The beer bottle in his mouth jumped up and down.
By Ziya


The big bulking giant has hair as white as a snow leopard. His head is as smooth as a pebble and his eyes are blue. He has a large stomach that is as big as a volcano. He wears a big blue jacket with a white shirt under it and brown pants and bare feet. He has a silver sword with a wooden handle that swings back and forward.
By Vinny


The big mean giant waved his sword at the children. He smells like a trash can. He is as big as a monster truck. He does not like children next to his house.
By Brock


The giant has long talens that look like they are stabbing you. He looks like an ogre. The giant looks like santa in his puffy jacket. The giant is as fat as an old man.
By Kieran


Once upon a time there was Angela. She had a pink top and a blue dress. Angela went swimming at the beach but then she saw magic in the sky that was going into her. It went into Angela’s hand. Angela went up, up, up in the sky. Angela was getting bigger and bigger and bigger and Angela was a giant. When Angela was in Giant land she saw a castle. Angela went there on her own.
By Evelyn





Jelly is a giant and a low life thug. He is really buff. He has straps wrapped around his arms like penguins huddling up in a group. His moustache is like a brush on his face. He likes wearing a floppy green shirt over his midnight black shirt. When he walks is sounds like this, Stomp! Stomp! Tap! Tap!. Then he growls. His pants wave in the wind as he walks. He has green hair and he smells like rotten fish. He is a T-rex!
By Jasper.


Boom! Boom! The giant dragged has huge, hairy feet into the lovely bright garden. You could hear the rattle of his boots. Suddenly I saw a glimpse of the giant. He looked huge and he had lots of tattoos and he big belt was like a dead elephant wrapped around his big torn pants to hold them up. His T-shirt was polka dotted with crumbs. He had curly hair that hung other his big wrinkly face. He smelt like he hadn’t had a bath for years!
By Georgia


The giant’s necklace is as golden as the sun. He is as heavy as a 1000kg weight.
Hi is as ugly as an unicorn’s insides. Stomp! He goes as he walks. His belly is fat like my dad’s!
By Finn


The giant has selfish beady eyes, grey swishy hair and white pale skin. He wears a blue wavy coat. He is as big as an elephant. When he walks into town, all the houses go Boom! Shatter! Crash! He hasn’t taken a bath in 128 years. His name is Sloop. He has a secret weapon, a soup weapon that makes him soup for dinner.
By Nikita.


Carter the giant is a thug with strapping around his arms. The strapping is white like the wool from a sheep. When Carter walks you can hear his footsteps going Bang! Bang! Bang! He has bright green hair that is spiky like the top of a skyscraper. The bottle in his mouth laughs as he drinks. Carter is a monster truck.
By Daniel






The rugged giant has big blue eyes like a frying with a cracked egg on top. As the giant steps down it is as loud as dynamite crashing together like fireworks. There is a huge Bang! The giant lived under a rock the weight of an elephant. But he owned a golden, sweet, sparkly swan that could lay magical eggs. He wore black spotted shorts with a criss cross shirt. The giant has a secret weapon that makes you smell of all different smells, The giant uses it with a powerful swell like a wave crashing down onto the surface of a sandy beach, The giant is an island in the sea.
By Acacia


The giant had a green Mohawk with spikes as sharp as knives.His eyes are blue like the sea. His T-shirt is waving in the air as he walks. He is a skyscraper. He eats teachers for lunch and schools for dinner.
By Brendon


Pow! Boom! The ginormous giant stormed into the garden with his axe swinging like a boy that just got off the merry go round. His fat tummy covered by as T-shirt with horizontal stripes that are as big as the horizon. His shorts are the size of the world. His name was Bob and his boots were as black as night.
By Hanna


The giant is very big like an elephant. He is as smelly as a trash can. He eats a house a day. His body is very dirty. He looks like a ferocious tiger. He speaks very loudly and it sounds terrible!
By Iris


The giant is a really funny guy. His name is Sergei. He is very tall like a giraffe and every time he tries to go to his house he hits his head. He wears brown shoes and stinks like wet dog. He wears a pizza coat and never brushes his teeth or hair. He only eats teachers and drinks his tears. His hedgehog sword brushes his enemies.
By Carlos D


The giant stomped his humongous hairy feet like an elephant. He had a worn out checkered T-shirt that used to say “Get off my lawn!” but now it said “et of awn”. He had jeans with five big holes in them and a leather belt that looked like a skunk. His boots were patched and were the size of a mansion. He had huge hairy hands( actually he was hairy everywhere) and a dirt tattoo across his face. He picked up a tree that had been dancing in the wind and used it as his sword.
By Tova


The giant stomps around like an elephant looking for its pride. He is the sky tower. He is a lion ready to attack. He lives in a mansion as big as the Earth. His garden is like paradise. He has big brown muddy boots. His castle is a grey colour. His name is snooty long legs. Crash! The giant’s servant elves are throwing big boulders around like kids when they’ve had a sugar rush. His belt wraps around him like a snake. He has a weapon that knocks everyone over when he moves it.
By Grace

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